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I have decided to make my chapters even bigger but to give it parts.

Chapter 23, "The Heracles"

Part 1

We were just home and waiting for the doctors to see Photon. He was very ill. I hoped that he would make it. But there were differant problems. I had to get my ship back. But I had no other ships. Nistral said that we could visit the Vulcranians. They told me that they were slaves of the Aluminiums, disguisting. Slaves, how dare they. We flew to the village and Nistral asked if the Vulcranians had some ship that we could use before I would get my ship back. They had one, A small ship. It wasn't strong, but strong enough to help me get my own ship back. Trend had found a location that might contain our ships. We landed on the surface and we would go to the hangar that Trend had found. Wow, the sanct-danians here were strong. I remembered myself on Sanct-Dan. The Sanct-Danians there were very weak. Not a real opponent. But here, I feared for my live. My ship wasn't very strong, but I had luck that Nistral and Pete were next to me.

We soon found the hangar. I landed, took an antimatter stungun and opened the door. A lot of scientists were hanging over my ship. What had they done to my ship? They had changed it into a strange device. I stunned the scientists, and took my ship. But they changed how it worked. I heard an group of guards coming. I jumped into the engine room. Strange, they changed the engine. I climbed out of my storm and took my smaller ship. I combined the batteries with eachother and started the ship. The engine was started, I landed my smaller ship into the cargo hold and jumped into the control panel of my own ship. I steared it out of the hangar, destroying there hangar almost. But I had my ship back. Or atleast a ship that looked like it. I felt sorry for Photon that I didn't managed to get his ship. But there were more oppertunities. I flew to Hypton and showed the guys outthere what happened to my ship. They didn't understand the technology put in. Then it should be very advanced technology. Everyone told me that I should bring my ship to the Handal Institute. Not an bad idea. Now I had my ship back, I coudn't control it. The Handal Institute was happy to investigate the technology that was put on my ship. But everyone knew that it should be very advanced because none of us understood it.

Part 2

But that was only have the problem. The Vulcranians were under attack. Strange, Strange Indeed. Because they were slaves of the Aluminiums. Why would the Aluminiums then attack them? I didn't get it, but the Vulcranians needed help. General Fire said that we should deliver guns to them. Fine for me, I took my small ship again and flew to Indusahal. Once there the Vulcranians told us that the Aluminiums had been capturing there friends. We delivered the gun and gave them instructions. Now they had these they could defend themselfs. We visited General Photon. He was ill, but it was going better. We asked him how he feld and all that he said was that he had been in some sort of paradise. He was probebly hallucinating. We got the doctors, and they would care about him.

We took our ships, but the Vulcranians were once again attacked, we flew as fast as we could to Indusahal to save the Vulcranians. We helped to defend the Vulcranians. But knew that we had to save them and had to get them away from Indusahal. We took the prisoners escort and landed on the surface. We flew to the village and took everyone that wanted to start an new live to Hypton. But a lot of them didn't trust us. They tought that we would get them to an prison or would kill them. But we couldn't force them to come with us. Many Vulcranians did followed us and we were heading to Hypton where they would be counted and that they would get an real name. They would be on a civilian transporter brought to other systems where they could start an new live. I said goodbye, but a Vulcranian called Ferpron didn't want to go. He wanted to help the fight. General Fire told him to go to the Vega Army Academy. New pilots got trained there. Ferpron would go there too. I hoped I would see him one time back and he said the same. We said goodbye, and he left.

Part 3

After this I got great news. The Handal Institute managed to learn the basics of my ship. They created a replica with there own technology and rebuild my ship as it was. But that was not everything. They told that they build an Experiamental Ship and told that the info they got from my ship was the final piece to make it the strongest ship ever. But it was experiamental and not tested yet. They told that if I wanted to test it that they would be happy. I was amazed. I could test the best ship ever constructed. They learned me how I had to fly it. The ship was called the THI-B2 Storm. A destructive storm with new technology such as the Rocket Launcer. The Rocket Launcer could use differant rockets. You had to use differant keys to activate them. For the storm they had the Rockets and the Thermo-Rockets. I could activate them by using -I- and -O-. It also had an absorber, it could take 5% damage away. A lethal ship, but very experiamental. Could a ship be save to carry so much weapons? It got the code name "The Heracles". But would I be able to control the ship? Or would the ship control me?

My Heracles was the greatest ship ever build by humans. And because of it's succes they made more ships. For every type of ship a rocket launcher was added. My friends wanted also my ship. But they had spent all there cryonite into there other ship, the THI-B series. Shark asked a day if he could borrow my ship. I said yes. Who didn't want to fly The Heracles? After Shark returned he said how amazing my ship was. I said that we should visit General Photon. The others agreed.

Part 4

"Hi Photon". I said. He was happy to see us. "Hi Dooms-Day, Or should I say Pbhuh"? General Photon smiled. Nistral and Shark asked us why General Photon called me Pbhuh. I told them my story, but Shark was confused. Was it really possible? That couldn't be. You can't travel trough time. After I explained, they asked why I would travel trough time and leave my friends and family. I said that I was searched by the U.S. The United Systems. After the Colonials and Imperials reunited, many Pilots, both fromt eh Colonials and Imperials were marked as criminials because in the past they had killed humans, ofcourse from the other fraction. I told them that I was marked as a criminal too, but I only did what I had to do, If I didn't kill the Imperials would kill me. They agreed.

"But guys, You forgot something". "Sorry photon?" I asked. He said that we still had to find Photon's ship. Aah, I knew I forgot something. We opened a chat with General Fire. "Hey Fire" I said. "It's General Fire to you, just kiding. What do you need Dooms-Day?" "We wanted to go look for Photon's Ship on SD Army Base." He was going to join us. We landed on the surface with 7 ships. A Storm, a Tank, a Engineer, a Shock, a Sniper, a Defender and my ship, what we would call a Storm+. We had no idea where to look so we started a systematic search. Nistral and I would search the North-East, Pete and General Fire would search the South-East, Trend and Demian would go the the South-West and Shark would stay on the Landing Zone and look in the North-West. "General Fire, I found something" said Shark. "What did you find Shark?" General Fire replied. "I will come" I said after General Fire finished his sentence. "Yeah, thats General Photon's Ship. Can you collect it Shark?" I asked "Sure". But just when we wanted to collect it, the ship used an stun dome and loaded a Shield and a Aim Scrambler. Crap. "Use your freaking minelayer Shark, don't let it escape." I said. "What the hell?, Dooms-Day. My mine got distracted by his aggrobeacon.

Can you tell all the weapons it uses?" Shark asked. "As you see it uses Stun Domes, Shields, Aim Scramber and an Aggrobeacon as you just saw, so mines and attack droids have no effect. It also uses Protector and Absorber. So it's very well protected. Thats why I found it so strange that he got caugth by Sanct-Danian's." After I told them everything we were already following the ship for a half hour. General Fire, Pete, Trend, Nistral and Demian joined the chase. After some stunning minutes we managed to get the ship. When we entered the cockpit a advanced computer was steering it. We managed to fly back to hypton. We wanted to gave the ship back to General Photon. But when we arrived, a message came to us. Axiom was under attack...
 

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Chapter 25, Arc of Evolution

Part 1

"Sir, We finished the ship." said an engineer. "Good work John." "So the antimatter core we stole from the Krygar Caste Imperials works?" "Yes sir, we managed to find out how it works and it sure is ten times better then our old fusion cores." "Mhh, John. How much did this cost us?" "Sir I am not sure, but it was very expensive" "John, your team has to make another ship" "Ok sir, I will tell the DSY team." "And remember John, no-one can know about the costs, the people of Venus and Mars would never elect our party again." I understand sir". "And John, remember it's war". This was the best shipyard in the sol system. It was mainly specialised in building fusion ships, but the Krygar Caste Imperials found out how they could make antimatter cores, and antimatter cores generated much more energy then the Democrata Shipyards Fusion cores. So the Democrate stole a antimatter core. The ship that was just finished was one of the two that would ever be build from it. And it was strong. The minerals that were used for it were or stolen or found on the mines on mars. Mars and Venus were home to the Democrata. 20 years ago the Democrata and the Krygar Caste Imperials sepperated. The Krygar Caste Imperials banished every Democrata to Mars and Venus, but they found rare minerals on Mars and the Krygar Caste Imperials attacked. The war dured a year and after that the Democrata build the Democrata Shipyard on Venus to protect themselfs.

"Senator Tramius, we are loosing too many ships, we have to destroy the factories on Earth." "No that is impossible, it would react into a war" "But Senator Tramius. We have the DSY-1, the Krygar Caste Imperials don't stand a chance against it" "Don't you get it, Senator Juma?" "If a war would come, the Krygar Caste Imperials would have a bigger chance of winning, the whole Gemini System are behind them!" "I know that, but if we could get the people of mizar behind us?" "Get real Senator Juma, The people of Mizar don't care about the solarian wars." "Gentleman, calm down. We all know that we have to strick now otherwise the Imperials only grow and they already managed to build Antimatter Cores." "But President Naja, we would suffer great losses." "Senator Tramius, we are suffering great losses already, we have to strick now!" "Ok, Everyone that is for the prupose to send troops down to Earth and destroy the factories, say yes" And so President Naja ended the conversation and the prupose was accepted. A war of 300 years would come, all because of this moment.

But it didn't work. The Imperial army kept growing. But the Democrata had one last plan, a radical plan. Maybe even insane. But the Democrata weren't the bad guys. Before they wanted to destroy almost whole Earth, they took the DNA of all animals that were ever created, even extinced animals so they could always stay. The ship was build on an blueprint of the DSY-1. And the ship was named the "Arc of Evolution". It was a great ship and protected very well. After that they dropped antimatter bombs on the surface of earth, nearly destroying and kill all humans that lived on Earth. But the factories were gone, right? No, the Krygar Caste Imperials managed to colonize a new system, the Omega System. It was much more protected then Earth because no Democrata had a astrogation chip. The Imperials rebuild factories in the Omega System. Many new ships were brougth into the Sol System in fleets. The Democrata often ambushed these fleets, but it didn't help. The Democrata lost more and more and the Imperials took over the only resource of money away from them, Mars. After 200 years of war, many Democrata fled to other systems such as the Mizar System and the Antares System. After 300 years of war, the war was over and the Democrata lost terrible. There were still some democrata left that didn't had a real base anymore, when the Mantis arrived they called themselfs the Rebels and the once glorious Sol System was partly in ashes and the Arc of Evolution was lost.

Part 2

What was my sister doing here? Why was she here? It explained a lot, thats why I couldn't find her in the future. She followed me. I was so happy to see her. She told that Primeus was also here. My Sister and a great friend, together with me in the Future. She immediatly opened a chat with Primeus and told him that he had found me. He jumped to us. After that we had a long conversation, If i wanted to return and if they wanted to stay here. After I told them, that i only knew one way to go back and that it was very dangerous, Primeus and Amphibios decided to join me with my fight with the I-L.

But first they could use some new ships. Amphibios and Primeus didn't had a lot of cryonite, so I bought 2 ships for them. An newly made engineer the THI-B2 Engineer, (that was based on my ship) with instead of a Materializer, a Rocket Launcher with health rockets and a THI-B2 Sniper, (that was also based on my ship) with instead of a Attack Field also a rocket launcher with range rockets. As I did have enough cryonite for another THI-B2 ship i bought the shock with instead of a Speed Field a rocket launcher with shock rockets. Now we all had a new ship with deadly weapons. I flew back to the Rigel System when we got an emergency broadcast from outerspace. This might be a trap. I would go alone and Primeus and Amphibios would go to Hypton to meet the others. After I came closer to the Emergency Broadcast I opened a chat with Hypton and told them that I found a strange ship that looked very familiar, but it looked differant, older maybe?

Part 3

"General, we have establised a connection to the Omega System". "Good, is there information about the planets?" "Yes General, it contains 5 planets and a moon. The first planet is has a normal atmosphere with lot's of vulcanoes. The second has a toxic atmosphere, so we have not managed to get there safely." "What do you mean?" "We lost a squadron out there, General". "Then you are gonna send a better squadron out there. We have to know what happened to them, otherwise the emporar is gonna kill me." "The emporar isn't that bad right?" "Have you met him, Dave?" "No general, but..." "But what Dave?" "Never mind general, I will send a new team out there." "And do you have more information about the others?" The third isn't very exciting, a desert planet. But it has a moon with many kinds of metals." "So thats a mining moon Dave?" "If we would colonize it, but it's hard to colonize it if we can't travel there. Maybe we could make a replica of the Stargate that we found" "Good idea Dave, I will inform the Emporar".

"So general Omnicron, you have established a connection to the Omega System?" "Yes your highesty, I think we could use it as a base to destroy the Democrata" "Yeah those humans are the most dispicable of all, I want you to eridicate them now" "But Venus and Mars are well protected by a mothership" "Then destroy that mothership, you lazy monkey!" "Yes Emporar, I will try." "Try?!!, Get out of my palace." "Sorry your highesty." And so General Omnicron had the task to destroy the ship. But first he had to locate the ship. After a time of scanning it, they managed to copy the look and size of the ship and placed in on a scanner. If this couldn't find it then nothing would. After he installed the device, he scanned the sol system and he found very quickly the ship. But just as he was traveling trough the last known location, the scanner picked up another ship. That couldn't be right. It was probebly stuck. He flew to the location and found the ship very quickly. He managed to get a team of pilots down and they started to attack the mothership. But for some reason it didn't fight back. But after a bright light and gamma radiation the ship was gone. General Omnicron would keep it for himself. If the emporar would know it he would probebly be send to prison, or worse...

Part 4

"Mayday, Mayday. We are under attack" the officer said from of the bridge. "Officer, we need to use our escape plan" "No, kelly. We haven't tested it yet" "But officer, it's our only way" "Kelly, I trust you, but if it fails. We don't know what will happen." "Officer, maybe this is the time to test it?" "People, I don't wanna interrupt, but our hull has only 30% left." "Mhh, I see. Ok, Kelly. Execute the Escape Plan. Waine, Keep the hull online" "On our way, Officer."
"Where are we." "I don't know Officer" "Waine find out where we are. Kelly try to connect to the Anatina." "I will try Officer" "Officer" "Yes Waine?" "I think we are no longer in Sol" "What do you mean Waine?" "Do you see that star?" "Yes I see him." "Thats the sun" "Impossible" "I am sorry Officer, but it's true" "Kelly, have you contacted the Anatina?" "Yes, but only weak signals. Do you wanna chat with the Anatina?" "If thats possible Kelly" "Ok, I will redirect it Officer"
"The Arc of Evolution for the Anatina" "The Arc of Evolution, your signal is weak" "Yeah, we are aware of that, we have some trouble" "Sorry the ...volution, you ...ouble ...?" "Sorry Anatina, why can't here you clear, but here are our coördinates." "We recei.. the coörd...." "I am gonna close the chat. The signal is too weak"
"Kelly, the signal is too weak. Waine, try to get the engine working again." "Officer, the engines are on again, but the antimatter cores have been damaged in the fight, we are only generating half the energy we have." "Waine, You think you can reactivate the Warp Drive?" "I guess so." "Good try to get it working."
"Waine, can you try to relocate us again?" "Kelly, could you try to re establish a connection with the Anatina? And tell them our location, maybe they can send a squadron to us." "Officer, the anatina replied that our coordinates are too far away. Wait, no. Impossible. The Imperials found us." "What? Imperials? Waine, how are our engines?" "They could make one warp, but after that they have to reload." "Can we warp to Venus or Mars?" "No, our engines don't have enough energy to warp to Venus or Mars. We might make it to Neptune." "Ok, Waine set course to Neptune. Kelly, send our new course to the Anatina."
Suddenly the antimatter engine exploded and the crew got lost in space.
 

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"So this is the Arc Of Evolution?" "They say so Fire." "Thanks for going to the distress call, it gaves us a mighty ship with many secrets back. The Arc Of Evolution was the holy grale of science. It was a mighty ship that somewhat looked like a Imperial Mothership. But it wasn't armed. All the space it had was filled with samples. Samples of DNA of all animals, even extinged animals. Yes, this ship was beautiful and we found it back. But it was strange that we found it back now. The General told us that many scientists would come or would like the ship to be moved to human territory so they could have a look at it. And General Fire wanted, Primeus, Amphibios and me to do that. We brought it to the human borders where the US ships took it over. But before we could leave many scientists and journalists came to us. They questioned us if we had found the ship and if it was still intact. We replied that we were only the finders, but that the ship signalled us. A little boy asked if he could have a goat. A goat? I told him, I am not a scientist, sorry. But maybe. Altought I would go for an cooler animal, like a tiger. A tiger was extinced for many centuries. Even before the nuclear war.

"Dooms-Day, can your squad return I have a job for you." Ah, not again. I called Primeus and Amphibios and told them that we had a new job. We flew back and saw some strange things when we did that. We arrived close to Fire's ship. He told that there was found a cryogen pod, we had to inspect if everything was clear so the doctors could have a look. We entered the zone with the cryogen pod when we saw a major ship that we had never witnessed before. It was huge and looked so much differant then other ships, but we knew from who they were, or atleast for who they were working for. The I-L.

"Primeus, Open fire. Amphibios, keep us alive." We shot at the big ship and it caused a lot of damage, but then it returned fire, it shot strange colored bullets with a total differant look then other bullets that we witnessed, it shot red rings that were spinning and they exploded just before your ship and trowing you back. We took a lot of damage and Amphibios repaired me, but her repair target failed, it damaged me. That was impossible, there was no such technology that you change your weapons. Atleast, not known to human. This was a strong enemy. We had to stop it now. I activated my repair droid and repaired the damage taken. Atleast that one worked. Then Primeus got taunted, but not with a normal taunt. He had no longer control over his engines and he got pulled to the ship. I had enough of him. I fired my missiles and thermo-rockets. Our enemy had already suffered sevear damage and Primeus finished him. After we killed it. We saw what he was doing their. Close to the Cryogen pod, there was a big relic. It looked great. And we collected it. After that, we brought some doctors to the area and they looked at the bodies. One was still alive. Maybe he could tell what this relic was...
 

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This is the latest annoucement for the next chapter, it will not be posted untill completion. So please wait.

The Chapter name is still unknown, but part 1 will tell more about the last survivor and the relic, because there will be more, i am not sure how many, maybe 3 or 4.

After that I will start on another story with a big change in the way of how you fight against the I-L because the Aluminiums will be kicked out of the I-L..
 

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The first ever image of a planet, I made Indusahal, it's possible that another one will follow, but it's hard to make.

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As you have seen I used the color of the magma from Axiom and took the walls from their, the ground is mantis hive and the buildings are CC.

I have also decided to delete 2 story planets from Rigel. Proxylunos was kinda copy-cat from The Moon and Adenahal has no practicle meaning. This means that the story will end soon and after that a bigger story will reveal.
 

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Here you are, writing page after page of story and even making maps, yet I'm too lazy to finish one.

Maybe I should just post it, Do I need 3000 words? :/
 

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lol, yeah i have added parts so you can finish a part a day, easy right? ^^
 

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Would be a lot easier if I didn't have to type all the boring crap. Oh well, good job on your story, keep it up(Even though I haven't the slightest clue about what is going on right now =P)
 

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Hardkirby said:
Would be a lot easier if I didn't have to type all the boring crap. Oh well, good job on your story, keep it up(Even though I haven't the slightest clue about what is going on right now =P)
dooms-day got trapped on sd army base just as general photon, then nistral and his team found out about the Vulcranians, he rescued dooms-day, found his ship, but his ship had modifications then primeus and amphibios came also to the future. and togehter they found the arc of evolution.
 

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Chapter 26, A new story

Part 1, Kelly Awakened

"Doctor, she is awake." "Thanks for saying, nurse.". "Where am i?" "Hello, I am doctor Vyne. You are in the hospital, i have to ask you a few questions." "Oké, but where am I?" "You are in the Commerce Centralian United System Hospital, or shortly said, the CC-US-H." "What is Commerce Central? And what do you mean by the United Systems?". "Commerce Central is an very old planet with an long history, located in the Gemini System. The United Systems, are a leaque of systems that united roughly 50 years ago. But can we continue with asking you questions?". "Oké, you can ask." "Whats your name, how old are you and whats the last thing you can remember?" "My name is Kelly Gunami, I am 28 years old. But the only thing I can remember is a big explosion and a freezing cold. What years is it? 2683?" "I am afraid that you are no longer in the 27th century, it's already the year 3151." "WHAT?" "You have been in a cryogenic pod which kept you alive all these years untill some brave hero's found you." "Wait?? Where are the others?" "I am afraid that you were the only one still alive." "This can't be true, where are the hero's that found me?" "I suggest you rest first, then you could go to the liberary to see what happend in these years.

"This can't be true, all these lost years, i nearly lost 6 centuries sleeping in a cryogenic pod, all that i missed. An alien race that attacked and killed nearly all humans. This is just insane." "What are you doing here miss Gunami, you have to go to bed, you are still too weak!" "I am sorry nurse, but I had to find out what happend to my people."
 

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This story has been discontinued as I have lost the whole story about it, I might finish it but am busy on a new project thats already taking shape, anyone that wants to join that project can contact me, it has to do with a lot of story extending from the current game. There are still a few parts left in my inbox to be finished, but I guess it might never be.
 
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