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Prologue
It was night, the dark sky of Kalabesh specked with the glitter of a million stars. A single ship, insignificant and small, sped across the inky ground, hugging close to the surface of the planet. As the craft was thrown into relief by the light of the moon, its features became more apparent. The front was lit brightly, orange lights pulsing along the hull. It had an unusual, almost organic texture and appearance to it. The ship itself was crescent shaped, unarmed and unmanned. It was a tiny mantis drone, the most meagre ship in the entire mantis armada.
The drone, having no pilot, was programmed to simply scan for any remaining cryonite deposits in the exhausted world it was located. With a simple diagnostics system activated, it began its routine sweep of the area, carefully scanning every inch of its designated territory. It slowly moved forward, as every patch of land turned up with negative results. The planet, as far as the mantis were concerned, was practically worthless. Their spread across the galaxy had left millions of worlds shattered and scarred, resources depleted and lives destroyed. Billions had been killed, for the mantis had no mercy. For them, cryonite was their god, their very reason for existence, and they would stop at nothing to get as much of it as possible. For centuries they had plundered the galaxy for the precious mineral, disregarding every life as mere obstacles in their quest for power.
Humans, young in their exploration of space, first made contact with the mantis centuries ago. Since then, they had been outmatched, outflanked and outnumbered, in every way. The Empire, corrupted by greed and the thirst for knowledge, befriended the mantis, betraying its people to a life of misery and oppression.

The drone was just about o finish its sweep of the area and shut down to recharge, when it detected something. Its scanner was picking up on a fairly large vein of cryonite, buried several metres below the ground. The drone zoomed over to the location to confirm the presence of the cryonite, scanning all the time. There was definitely a cryonite vein underground, enough to warrant the attention of the Mantis Empire. The drone was about to transfer the data to the orbiting harvesters, who would mine the reserve dry, when an antimatter tipped rocket roared out of nowhere, heading straight for the drone. In a resounding boom, the drone was ripped apart, as the STAM-S class Lightning Storm Prometheus shimmered into the visible spectrum.
The pilot felt a wave of relief as he watched the debris from the explosion settle. If the Mantis had found out about even the smallest cryonite reserve on Kalabesh, they would send hundreds of harvesters and support ships to mine the planet to a cinder, and the rebel outpost would have been discovered. He had been shadowing the drone for over an hour, fearful it would discover the only known cryonite reserve left in the planet. As soon as he had seen the drone change course, his finger had started to hover over the rocket trigger.
The pilots name was Erik Spiro, one of the most accomplished and respected Captains in the rebel armada. He had been stationed to the defence of Kalabesh, the rebels new base of operations, after the disastrous mantis takeover of the Gemini system. For five months he and an elite team of pilots from across the galaxy had hunted mantis drones and scouts, keeping the population of Kalabesh safe from a possible mantis incursion. He, being the leader of the team, had had his ship equipped with a prototype cloaking device, to help increase his stealth when following drones.
Erik sent an update to the base. Mission complete. Target destroyed.
He activated the orbital thrusters on Prometheus, and the powerful ship rocketed into the Kalabesh sky. With a low thundering sound, it broke the sound barrier as it climbed.
For years the human settlement had lived in fear of being discovered. But now, change was coming. The tables were about to be turned on the mantis empire.
Humanity was about to fight back.
 

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I don't think rebels belong on Kalabesh or in Vega.

As Vega is in command of the Colonials, and Kalabesh in command of the smugglers.
 

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see, this is what happens when you dont play through the new storyline ^^
like last time ive taken a few liberties with the story to fit better, but ive tried to keep the gist of the storyline lol
 

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my writings kinda stalled for a while...one word: spore :LOL: :devilish:
i dont have time for anything else now! o_O
 

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What in Spode is wrong with ye brain now nebula? o_O
 

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nyeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeh phhhh KAPUT...

That is all.
next part coming in a few days!! i WILL finish this ^^
 

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For this story I mention several ingame clans. Theyre not necessarily the best or most well known, but they all sound to me like ‘proper’ clan names to fit the story ^^ with the exception of hammers, I couldn’t not mention them.
And im using a few real peoples player names. If you don’t like it, sue me :devilish:
Chapter 1

For three months, the mantis activity in the Vega system had escalated, and Sergeant Nash was worried. The mantis had always regarded the Vega system with disdain: no cryonite, no interest. Now though, the amount of drones and scouts posted to Kalabesh had tripled, causing all kinds of problems for the rebels and civilians there. It wasn’t usual mantis behaviour, it wasn’t right.
Now sergeant Nash knew why. His superiors had just contacted him with disturbing news, about the mantis, and their plans.

Sergeant Nash was a powerfully built man, and he exuded authority wherever he went. For ten years he had been a prominent rebel leader, but now in his later years he was mostly in charge of training new rebel pilots. A scar ran down the side of his cheek and eye, the sole reminder of an horrific and almost forgotten battle between the mantis and rebel forces thirty years ago. He had been posted to the Mizar system, and two weeks after he started work the rebel forces, an enormous Mantis fleet erupted through the Mizar stargate, and swarmed through the system. 17 billion people had perished, and the whole of the Mizar system surrendered to the mantis regime in days.
Nash had jettisoned his escape pod, only to crash onto the nightmarish surface of the planet Molikar. With a thick, caustic atmosphere, he had only a few hours of oxygen left, and he was surrounded by mantis. Weak and starving, he had lost consciousness, and was miraculously found by a rebel squad evacuating the planet. The rebels had told him how they found him, half dead and with minutes of air left. The incident had scarred Nash, physically and mentally, and he never fully recovered. But the incident had also given Nash a renewed sense of purpose: fight against the mantis, and never give up.
Nash stared out of the starbase window, lost in thoughts of the past.
He watched as a STAM storm approached the base and dock. It was Captain Spiro’s Prometheus, a powerful and advanced warship, piloted by one of the most accomplished men Nash had ever met. The rebels need people like him, thought Nash.
With a deep breath, Nash smoothed his uniform, and briskly walked out of the observation deck to meet Spiro.
The turbo lift of the Kalabesh starbase hummed gently as it sped Erik through 800 metres of floors. Erik cleared his throat as the lift slowed to a stop. The doors opened, and Erik was taken aback to find a face he knew very well greet him. At 6 foot 5, sergeant Nash towered over most men, Erik included, and his weathered face hinted at untold past hardship.
‘Captain Spiro, nice to see you’, he said gruffly, a crooked smile on his face.
‘sergeant’, Erik replied, trying not to show the surprise in his face. The sergeant never usually greeted returning Captains personally. But these were not usual times.
Erik got straight to the point.
‘sergeant, why have you met me here?,’ he asked, a feeling of unease rising in his stomach.
The sergeant made no reply. He simply beckoned Erik into a briefing room. A massive hologram screen was set into the floor, and it showed an image of Kalabesh, with red dots strewn over the surface. Many other important looking people were gathered there, all with the same grave yet determined look on their faces. With a start, Erik recognized Admiral Hornblower seated amongst the officers, his fingertips pressed together as he waited.
Erik took a seat near the front, and waited in trepidation for Nash to begin.
Sergeant Nash walked over in front of the holo screen, and cleared his throat.
‘ladies and gentlemen, assorted officers and comrades of the rebel forces, today I speak to you of a great threat to humanity. Possibly the single greatest threat we have ever endured. Earlier today, a rebel ship caught wind of a mantis drone confirming the presence of cryonite below the planets surface to the mantis high command. They failed to stop the transmission.’
Nash’s opening words were few, but their impact was huge. Whispers rippled through the seated officers, and fear soon followed. If the mantis knew cryonite was still on Kalabesh… then one of the last bastians of human resistance would be discovered.
Nash watched the rising commotion for a few seconds, then called for silence. He started to speak once again.
‘im afraid I have more bad news. Not only do the mantis now know of the cryonite reserves, the drone also transmitted data of our whereabouts and numbers to its masters.’
The tension before this sentence was nothing compared to now. Gasps ripped through the room, as people struggled to process this revelation.
‘Our forces in Sol,’ continued Nash, ‘have confirmed to us the mantis are assembling an invasion fleet to overrun the Vega system. There are reportedly…’
Nash trailed off, his eyes closed tight. With a deep breath, he continued.
‘there are reportedly 150,000 ships gathered at the Draconis gate. It seems they will invade in a matter of days, maybe weeks…’
Before, gasps and fear had spread through the room after Nash’s sentences. Now, a cold, empty despair infected every person present.
Erik sat, feeling a sense of crushing hopelessness paralyse his thoughts. 150,000 ships…
Never in the history of the mantis wars had such an enormous fleet been assembled. It was three times the size of the Gemini invasion force, a force that had easily brought the entire system to its knees in hours. Erik started to shake uncontrollably. They were doomed. Humanity was about to perish at the hands of the mantis, and there was nothing anyone could do about it.

Nash had expected this kind of reaction, but he was still deeply disappointed to see everyone in the room give up so easily. An old rage rose up in him, an anger born of hatred for the mantis, and sustained by his utterly unbreakable will to see humans triumph over them. He slammed a massive fist onto the holoscreen console. Several people jumped, and he had everyone’s attention in seconds.
‘for Gods sake!’, he spat, losing his patience. ‘we cant give up now! If we do that, then we truly are dead!’
‘sergeant’, said Hornblower, his voice heavy with emotion, ‘that fleet will be enough to incinerate every planet in the Vega system. We cannot possibly stand up to an armada that big. We must… evacuate vega, while there’s still time.’
At this, sergeant Nash said nothing. He walked over to Hornblower, and grabbed him by the lapels of his jacket. He easily lifted him off his feet.
‘Of all the people to give up, I would have put you last on my list, Hornblower!’, the sergeant roared.
‘We stand at a crucial moment, and all you can think about is running away?! WHERES YOUR HONOUR?!’ Nash almost screamed the last sentence. He dropped Hornblower back on his feet, leaving him shaken.
‘ in spite of everything,’ the sergeant continued, ‘there is hope. The sayaron sanctuary is sending over its ENTIRE fleet to help us. All 40,000 of them. In addition, pirates and smugglers from across the galaxy are being enlisted into the rebel force. We will use these peoples skills to our advantage, they are well suited to hit and run attacks.
Another stir of murmurings rustled through the crowd. Common pirates helping the rebel cause? It was unheard of. Nash rolled his eyes. At the brink of annihilation, and these people STILL were too proud and haughty to get down and dirty to survive. He continued as if nothing had happened.
‘however, there are still several powerful pirate clans who refuse to help us. In order for us to gain sufficient numbers, we must bring them under our control. There are three main clans who will need defeating. Hammers, the most powerful clan in the entire galaxy, commanded by a pirate who goes by the name of ‘Warhammers’. they hold several planets under their thumb, and have access to more than 10,000 ships. They will be a valuable addition to our armada’
Officers all around the room looked stunned. Hammers where notorious for being the most ruthless and powerful pirates in the galaxy. The thought of absorbing their fleets into the rebel cause…was shocking.
‘the second,’ continued Nash impassively,’ is the most elusive clan we have ever encountered. NOVA, led by a pirate called uss_apollo. Not much is known about these people, but we can safely assume they are as deadly as any other pirate clan. They don’t have as many planets under their control, but they are still well supplied and well defended against attack.’
‘the third and final clan we will attack, I think you have all heard of. The Guardians, led by V1-Hyper. They are the most ancient pirate clan in the galaxy, they’ve been around since first contact with the mantis. Our intel currently suggests their main force is hiding out in the Sirius system. We start the attack on Hammers in 5 hours. Be ready, people.’
Nash finished his speech, and briskly walked out of the briefing room. The holo display flickered and disappeared, leaving the room in half dark. The crowd of officers were left to absorb the impact of the sergeants words. A tense atmosphere descended on them. But it was not a depressed, despairing tension. It was one of determination, and hope. The mantis may playing with a stacked deck, but humanity was about to throw all their cards on the table.
It was time to fight.
 

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Chapter 2
Erik sat alone in his room, trying his best to clear his mind before the inevitable battle began. He breathed deeply, and attempted to completely relax his body. It was a technique he had taken up after witnessing the horror of the mantis Gemini invasion, and it usually worked, to some degree. But today, even his deepest thoughts were being attacked by the mantis. Erik often wondered why the mantis were just so determined in their conquest of the galaxy, and their gaining of the cryonite. It almost seemed to go beyond mere lust for power, it was as if the cryonite was their very lifeblood…
A soft intercom beep interrupted his meditation. Erik opened his eyes, to see the face of Major Natassia Ivanova looking back at him on the screen.
‘am I interrupting, Captain Spiro?’ she inquired. She appeared to be dressed in her full pilot gear: ready for the fight against the pirate clans.
‘always got time for you, Natassia,’ Erik replied warmly.
The majors lips pursed slightly at the sound of her first name.
‘you know its not protocol to call superiors by their first name, spiro…’ ivanova trailed off. As much as she disliked being called Natassia by Spiro, she couldn’t help but grin at the Captain’s nerve. After all they had been through together, it didn’t really matter…
‘ivanova cleared her throat as she continued.
‘I was just calling to give you tactical data about our upcoming battle with Hammers. It seems as though they are an extremely aggressive clan, more likely to head on attack than hide out and wait in the shadows. Therefore, we also need to launch a full on attack once we reach their base. The main fleet will be comprised of The Hornblower fleet, with mine and sergeant Nash’s fleet providing heavy artillery.’ have you got all that?’
‘Nash is fighting too?!’ exclaimed Erik. The sergeant, although possessing undeniable talent as a fleet commander, was well past his prime, and almost never ventured outside of Kalabesh anyway. The fact that he was taking part in the battle showed how important it was that they win.
The major nodded briefly in response, then pressed a few buttons on her control panel. A data transfer appeared on Eriks screen, and Erik copied it to his handheld computer. It was the exact plan for the battle, with fleet formations and possible enemy locations listed on the soft blue screen.
Erik was surprised to see the sparse amount of ships being spared for the operation.
‘only 8,000 ships?’ he wondered out aloud, ‘you sure this is enough to overcome Hammers?’
Ivanova grinned.
Ah, but the thing with Hammers, as most pirate clans, is once you take out their core fleet, the underlings panic and are quick to sign the surrender document. We are only attacking Hammers’ main force, and we shouldn’t have too much trouble with them…’
‘if you say so’ replied Erik, still sceptical. Nevertheless, he sat back down on the bed, fairly satisfied.
When is the operation starting?’, asked Erik.
‘two hours, then our force will gate out into the antares system, where the Hammers main fleet is thought to be stationed. Be ready’
‘ok, see you then, Nat.’, replied Erik.
Ivanova rolled her eyes. With the merest flicker of a smile curling her lips, her image disappeared from the screen. Erik watched as the intercom switched off, then sighed thoughtfully. If only he wasn’t her colleague…
He shook his head. I mustn’t get distracted, he thought.
Erik put down the handheld computer, then crossed his legs and closed his eyes. With a deep breath, he continued his meditation.

*****

Two hours later, Captain Erik Spiro walked out into the Kalabesh Starbase main hangar. It was an enormous, cavernous room, housing 500 rebel ships. There were two other hangars in the starbase, both able to hold 300 ships each at any time. There were yet more rebel ships waiting in orbit of Kalabesh, and even more waiting patiently in the Antares system. Among the hundreds of powerful warships stationed here, Erik spotted the one he was looking for: the STAM-S class Lightning Storm Prometheus. At 30 metres long, the ship one of the largest ever produced by Sol Technologies, and terrifyingly well armed.

Erik had seen through many battles thanks to this ship, and he had grown extremely fond of it. He swung up into the cockpit, his mind filled with thoughts of the coming battle. He often wondered why the rebel leaders had never cracked down on the pirates earlier. If humans had been united from the start, maybe they wouldn’t had fallen so far. The pirate clans had grown powerful, powerful enough to fight back against the mantis even. It was a well known fact that pirates outnumbered the rebels almost three to one, and rebels joined them everyday. Clans often fought against each other, however, and that was the rebels advantage over them. The rebels may be weak, they may be desperately clinging on to survival, but at least they were a united effort. And they would use this united front against the pirates, to finally, finally unite humankind against its true enemy.
 

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Put The Orions Elite in this story! now. :mrorange:

Aside from that, this is a great story.
 

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phew. heres the third chapter, took me ages to write it o_O
hope you all enjoy. ^^
Chapter 3

Stargate travel, although the most useful and efficient way of traversing the galaxy humankind has discovered, is uncomfortable to say the least. The process of individually breaking down every atom into a digital copy of itself, then transporting it thousands of light years away, is an extremely novel experience for the human brain. Upon exiting a stargate, people often feel a sense of inexplicable euphoria, almost as if the brain is celebrating being put back together again. This, combined with the surreal experience of having your very thoughts digitized, makes stargate travel one of the strangest things ever to happen for many people. Some people, before the mantis invaded, became known as ‘gaters’, gating in and out for a euphoric and cheap high.

Erik exited the stargate, brimming with happiness. Everything seemed intensified, more colourful and brighter. Then, slowly, the uplifted feeling drained away from him as he realized the situation. Stretching out in front of him, were thousands of imposing ships. Some gleamed in the sunlight, while others wore their dirt with pride. A broadcast came through on his screen, sent to every ship in the strike force.
‘all pilots,’ came Nash’s voice through the speaker, ‘this is Sergeant Nash speaking. The pirate fleet is 800,000 km ahead. They seem to have known we were coming, and are heading here. They will make contact with our fleet in 3 minutes. Be ready people. We must not lose this battle. Its vital humankind are united in against the mantis.

Erik looked out of his cockpit window. There, far ahead of him, he saw thousands of tiny glittering specks. He swallowed nervously. Out of all the battles he had fought, he had never gone up against his fellow humans. It made it more personal than fighting mantis. Stretching below him, thousands of miles across, was the planet Terasa. It was not actually a real planet, instead, it had been constructed from thousands of asteroids and meteorites floating in the Antares asteroid belt. an amazing feat of engineering and ingenuity, it had taken over a century to perfect the atmospheric conditions and terrain for the eager masses. Once opened, it became the largest holiday resort in the galaxy. That was, until the first wave of mantis came…
Humans had been lucky when it came to the antares system. The mantis seemed uninterested when it came to terasa, as it was made with minimal cryonite reserves. Lustra, however, didn’t fare so well. As it had rich veins of cryonite far below the surface, the mantis had descended with unsurpassed force on the planet. The people had fought back, fiercely. But, like all the systems plundered and attacked by the mantis, slowly they were brought to their knees, and destroyed.
Teresa had one thing going for it, however: The Carl Sagan Defence Force. A fleet made up of hundreds, maybe thousands of scientists and soldiers alike, they guarded the last bastion of human scientific endeavour in the antares system. It was through the efforts of these men and women that antimatter technology took off, resulting in STAM R and STAM S class warships eventually being produced.

Erik looked at the fleet report. The pirate armada was starting to move, inexorably coming to meet the rebels. He swallowed, and strapped into the pilots chair securely. A broadcast came in again.
‘all ships, maintain formation and advance! Well meet them halfway. Expect to make contact in 30 seconds and counting!’
Erik gently opened the thrusters on Prometheus. The powerful ship rumbled into life, like a great beast roused from sleep, and moved forward at 300 miles per hour. The ship stayed with the rest of the rebel ships, as the two fleets met like tidal waves clashing.

*****

Erik had been in some intense battles before, but not even the Gemini invasion came close to the ferocity of the way the pirates fought. These were no disparate, disorganized little group. They were well disciplined and deadly in battle, and it was showing. Erik found himself fighting several Hammers ships at once, antimatter pellets cascading around his hull. Prometheus shook with every impact, as more and more blaster fire found its way to him. Erik’s expression hardened. He had an idea how to deal with these guys. He stopped trying to run. With a few deft flicks he activated his aim computer, and swung the ship round to face his aggressors.
He was separated from the main battle, the rest of the ships were all engaged in furious battle. He would have to take them on by himself.

Fingers blurred with skilled speed, he activated all rocket launchers and gun batteries. Antimatter shells and warheads spewed from every cannon on Prometheus as the mighty ship twisted and turned in between the pirate vessels. STAM storms, although heavily armed and moderately well armoured, possessed such powerful and advanced engines and gyroscopic engineering that it could literally turn 180 degrees mid air when piloted by a skilled enough captain. And Erik was most certainly skilled enough. Sweat dripped down his brow as he manoeuvred the massive storm in between 4 Hammers ships, using every trick in the book to stay alive. Prometheus twisted and turned in between the ships, outmanoeuvring them at every turn. Erik knew if he stopped moving, he was dead. He targeted the nearest Hammers ships, and released every weapon he had on it. The ship was assaulted by hundreds of explosives, and was utterly destroyed. Erik felt a small spark of relief, but there were still 3 more ships to deal with. He knew if he kept to the same plan, he was almost untouchable.

Torpedoes and blaster pellets smashed into Prometheus, but the mighty ship was barely taking any damage. Daniel Lennox watched agog as it took hit after hit, seemingly shaking off every attack. As part of the Hammers clan, he had heard about Spiro’s prowess on the battlefield, but he found it hard to believe he could have a nigh-on invincible ship that could take dozens of warheads to the hull and still function, let alone destroy his squad mates. Lennox frowned, and called up a slowed- down video of the torpedoes smashing into Prometheus.
With a pang of horror, he realised just how clever Captain Spiro really was. He was using an old and almost forgotten tactic, keeping so close to his enemies that the rockets were striking him before they had a chance to prime themselves. The warheads were harmlessly bouncing off the hull of Prometheus, never having the chance to deliver their deadly payload. The same was going for the antimatter pellets, as they were effectively tiny torpedoes themselves. Spiro’s weapons appeared to be built for closer range than the pirates ships, so were able to arm quicker and deal damage to his enemies.
Lennox gave a crooked smile, he knew exactly how to deal with Spiro now. He opened a line to the rest of his squadron.
‘ keep your distance! Your torpedoes aren’t arming properly!’
With that, the Hammers ships blasted away from Prometheus, then turned around and resumed fire. This time, the ship started taking damage from every shot.
Lennox sat back. He looked forward to the reward he would receive after killing the legendary Captain Erik Spiro…

Things had taken a turn for the worst for Erik. Sparks flew inside his cockpit as his ship was hammered by weaponry. He didn’t think his strategy would be beaten so easily, he had been relying on it to survive. No warship, no matter how powerful or well built, could take a heavy salvo from 3 similarly powerful ships for long. As rocket after rocket pulverised his ship, chunks were torn off the hull, power couplings were shredded, and alarms blared in Erik’s ears. He closed his eyes, and breathed deeply. After all he had done, all the battles he had been in, this was to be his last. Dying, trying to unite humanity against its common enemy…he was happy for it to end like this…

Just as he thought it would, the bombardment stopped. He was dead, he knew it. At last, he had peace.
He opened his eyes, and was taken aback by the familiar surroundings. He was still in his cockpit, he was still in the antares system, and he was still most definitely alive. The only thing that was different was the blue tinted shield surrounding his ship, energy pulsing in its ion shell. Eriks brow furrowed. Storms didn’t have shields…that must mean…
He looked to his right. 8 rebel ships were flanking him, the wreckage of the hammers ships strewn around them. Among them was a Constructor Engineer ship, its Protector shield the reason why the attack had been suddenly cut off. He opened a line to the Engineer, and was surprised to see sergeant Nash facing him, a wry look on his face.
‘you came in an engineer, sir?’, he asked. He would have thought Nash would be in a powerful flagship rather than a mere support ship.
‘well its lucky I chose the best of its kind, Spiro’, replied Nash dryly. ‘we should head back to the battle. Our men need us’
‘understood, sir’.
With that, the nine ships blasted back to the furious melee.

Erik powered his tactical thrusters again. He would need every bit of manoeuvrability to survive this battle. It seemed the battle had not moved very far forward since he had departed from it. There were still several thousand ships engaged in a seemingly stalemate battle. Erik frowned. This was not going well for the rebels. If they could not bring in Hammers massive fleet under their own command, how could they hope to repel the mantis invasion?
Before he had time to dwell on this more, his proximity alarm started beeping. A deep rumbling vibrated through his ship and body, and a blip appeared on his radar. Eriks eyes widened as a gargantuan ship thundered overhead. It was bigger than any human ship he had ever seen, and most mantis ships. It had a cylindrical, barrel like shape, and was mounted with two massive blasters. The ship streaked towards a parsec, and fired. Thousands of antimatter pellets smashed into the ships hull, and the parsec literally melted out of existence before it even had a chance to return fire. 4 rebel ships rushed in to face this new enemy, but the giant ship seemed utterly impervious to blaster fire. In moments, all four ships were obliterated by the incessant stream of fire coming from the huge ship.
Erik was aghast at this new ship. He had never seen such a well armoured and well armed craft in his life. He opened a line to Nash, who answered with an expression a match to his own.
‘Nash, what the hell is this thing?! It blasted out of nowhere and its tearing our ships to pieces!’
Nash grimaced before answering.
‘its called a Conquest ship, Spiro. It was developed by our top scientists and engineers to fight the mantis, but pirates raided the research base and stole the blueprints for it. It seems as though most clans have at least one of them these days. I didn’t think Hammers would be so quick to use their own.’
Eriks mind was racing. The rebels had access to ships like these?! With several thousand of these ships, the mantis would be annihilated in every battle!
‘Nash,’ started Erik, ‘why haven’t we mass produced these things?!’
‘because Conquest ships are EXTRAORDINARILY expensive to make, Captain. We’ve never really had the resources to make one, so we never bothered.’
‘ok, so how is it that well armoured? The thing took down five of our ships without a scratch!’
‘it uses an ore called vatistinoid in its hull. It has amazing repellent properties, and can deflect away antimatter particles, ions, fusion pellets… Add to that its reinforced Deluvian armor and you have a formidable beast of a ship.’
Erik slumped. He watched as the enormous vessel took the firepower of 15 warships, barely taking damage. In an enormous explosion, it activated an aggrobomb more powerful than any Erik had ever seen. The orange ring of destruction swept through the ships, and they were pulverised in a blinding light.
‘Nash, we have to do something about this ship! Well lose this battle if this continues!’
Te sergeant made no reply. The great man seemed, for once, at a loss. He shook his head in frustration.
‘I don’t see how we can destroy it, Spiro. The hull is almost indestructible, and it has the firepower of a parsec. I think we should…withdraw for now.’
At this remark, Erik suddenly saw red. In a deadly whisper he spoke.
‘I did not join the rebel army at the risk of mine and my family’s life, travel from system to system fighting horrific battles, and lose hundreds of comrades to be told we should WITHDRAW, sergeant. I’m not standing for this.’
‘well id love to hear any ideas you have, spiro!’, spat Nash.
Erik thought hard. The rear of the ship didn’t seem so heavily armoured, maybe if he…
Erik suddenly had an idea. A mad, insane idea, but an idea nonetheless. With renewed confidence, he turned back to Nash.
‘a gun can’t penetrate that armour, sir. But a large object, travelling at warp speed would tear straight through it.’
‘great. Give me a superluminal weapon and ill do it,’ replied the sergeant testily.
‘oh, we’ve already got one, sir. Me’
Nash looked confused for an instant, then his eyes widened in horror.
‘spiro! Are you insane?! you’ll die!’
Maybe not, if I time things right,’ replied Erik.
‘but spiro, your ship…’
‘shes just a ship Nash. Our freedom is at stake’, replied Erik resolutely.
Before Nash could say anything, he cut the connection and swung Prometheus round to face the massive ship ahead of him. He took a deep breath. Now was the time to act, before it could do any more damage to the rebel fleet. With a skilled, lightning fast move, he did three things. He flipped the emergency self destruct button. He pulled the eject escape pod lever, and he reached down on the screen, and fired his warp thrusters.
As the pod shot out from his ship, he saw Prometheus elongate for an instant, then with the force of a small astral impact, rammed into the titanic craft at 80 times the speed of light. The storm drove into the Conquest ship, then self-destructed with an enormous antimatter/matter annihilation. The Conquest ship was torn apart from the inside, debris scattering the surrounding space, and a shockwave blasting Eriks escape pod. The last thing he remembered before being knocked unconscious was the sight of the husk of the destroyed Conquest ship, and the remains of his own melting into space.

WHOO. i just realized this was the 18,000th post!!! whooooooooooooo... :eek: :D ^^ :devilish:
 

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NIce ones, but i don't think that the conquest ship is the biggest ever human ship. I mean, an Imperial Battleship is almost as large, and there are porbably larger imperial ships.
 

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Lol true, or maybe the ´´conquest ship´´ is a general term of large barrel-shaped freighters that was rebuilt into a battleship. Atleast... i think it looks like a freighter.
 

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the next part is coming in the next month...ive been VERY busy lately lol
but ive made chapter 5 the best i can ^^
 

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you seem to be my one and only fan at the momet defacto ;)
curse you colleeeeeege!! :mad:
 

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nebulaman said:
the next part is coming in the next month...ive been VERY busy lately lol
but ive made chapter 5 the best i can ^^
You mean chapter 4? you only just wrote chapter 3
 
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