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Thnks. Thats a compilement of everything in the thread that we discussed combined, I was hoping people would keep posting more ideas but that "super" idea kill the threat it seems.
 

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CommanderCody said:
Thnks. Thats a compilement of everything in the thread that we discussed combined, I was hoping people would keep posting more ideas but that "super" idea kill the threat it seems.
But make it some more logical instead of putting everything together, talk more about the fractions, who are the rebels etc.
 

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Vega Rebels

The Vega Rebels, also known as Radicals, were against an alliance with the antares system, when they atempted to assasinate the Vega Leader, they got banished from Vega and Antares, some are now hidden in the Trans-Aurorian Asteroid Belt, letting there army grow to attack vega.
 
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Ok well I was trying to throw it all together so I didnt get a chance to edit anything but I'll start tweaking it. I also may move it to another thread.
 

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Something you should certainly improve with your ideas are the story, they do feel a bit odd...

well, less complaints, more working! Here's an idea for a system in the story i am making:

Caprica

Caprica was once the Industrial center of the UCF. At it's peak, 670 Capital ships were constructed, each year. The Caprica prime orbital shipyards, in 34 506 Km Geostationary orbit around Caprica III (or caprica prime) covers and area of 11 Cubic kilometers, and is one of the biggest shipyard in the known universe.

However, this is where the happy part ends.

During the invasion of Gemini, a large portion of the Caprican fleet was sent to Gemini as reinforcements. This gave the Mantis an opportunity to breach the Caprican defenses and plant bombs known as ´´hellrisers´´
, which actually are based on 20th century Thermobaric bombs, which works by using the oxygen in the air as fuel for a firestorm, thereof the name.

The results were catasthrophal, The Caprica shipyards were completely destroyed by Mantis bomber fire, and the hellriser bombing on Caprica Prime led to the death of 5 600 000 000 people.

Planets:

Comet Aidanon: This comet is known for it's remarkably short orbit, much shorter than any other comet.
It is rumoured that the comet houses massive amounts of cryonite, but so far, only middle-worth ores such as Thermo Iron Ore and Deluvian Graphite has been found.

Caprica Prime: Once a lush world, very similar to Earth, but is now however a harsh wasteland. A red, rocky landscape with the skeletons of worn down structures is what you will find these days, on the planet that once was the industrial powerhouse of the entire UCF.

The planet contains large amounts of Cryonite ore, which made it a good place for shipyards, but the true cryonite reserve is deep down, were barely the mantis can reach it.

Azthal: Named after the methanoidian god of mystery, this planet was a rather dull place, but got it's name deserved after some amazing archeological discoveries just weeks before the invasion. It is not clear what the scientists ever discovered, but one thing that is true is that the portion of the planet were the discoveries were made now is under extremely heavy Mantis guard, even if there are barely no Cryonite whatsoever on the planet.
 

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Nice idea Defacto, here's my version of a cool system:

Salem

Salem, one of the wonders of the entire world as we know it. Studies on the rock forming the 8th wonder of the world, Janne - Previously called by the discoverer of the look-like planet: Eden's Garden - show that it was formed by a explosion of the Salem System star, studies also showed that the star that explored was 5 times bigger than the one in Solar system, the mystery of the light that is still everywhere in Salem system is yet to be solved, some people say the explosion was so big that the light produced by the big fire and burning gas was so big that till nowadays it still have not yet ended, but some people say Salem Rook, the God of Salem System, is the God we ever knew and Salem is his paradise, where a human soul will go after its death.



The explosion of Salem Star Created some look-like planets and Asteroids that are habitable places, the hole background and planets are white/and calming planets

Motra Called after its discoverer, John Motra, this Asteroid is as big as Saturn, this Asteroid circles around the remains of the star's explosion, it's called by it's habitants - The Dancing Lady - as it circuits around the star in various orbits, nowadays we have found over 100 circuit which Motra circuits in around the Salem Star. discovered in the 31th century

Story planet

Kamar Kamar is discovered at the 32th century, it was hard to coordinate as it was hiding right in the middle of the star, and its difficult to get to, some people say it's the Paradise, hard route to get to it, but it has ever lasting energy and beauty, Kamar has never been invaded by any sort of Mantis race

Conquest planet

Sorlas The only Asteroid which looks like a planet in the Salem system, it cannot be called a planet as it does not have an atmosphere. Sorlas was the Main Energy consuming research base in the Salem System, Mantis have found this planet by using the force of the Artifacts, habitants are not afraid to fight, Sorlas is known to be the only planet that stood up against the Mantis invasion and completely got them out of the planet - However, Sorlas been heavily invaded in the 34th Century and is now crawling with Mantis, but the Sorlasian fighters are always there to strike back

Story planet

Jhanam Jhanam, all scientists have to say about it is - Mysterious - Jhanam is a look-like planet which have long time erupting Volcanoes. The most famous one is Satan Mountain, the volcano that suddenly erupted at the 33th century and till now has not stopped, huge holes in the ground eat up the lavas and it goes back to the center of the Asteroid, its mostly covered with Mantis Mines, making lavas some kind of ammunition for their weapons.

Story planet

Kana The last look-like planet to be discovered in the 35th Century, by the Scientist Kef Kenaan, this planet offers a unlimited source of energy, it is known to erupt energy out of holes in the ground, Kana been hid from any Human or Mantis contact for years, until it has been found by a "Search for Resources Human Fleet" and it been revealed the the world very fast as the Mantis MotherShips attacked Kana and is now using it for Energy weapons and cutting human resources of their needs of Energy

Story planet

Janne Janne means Paradise, and it is litteraly a paradise, it's astonishing mix of snow and balanced temperature offers the most wonderful landscape to witness in the world, you can fly in your ship on snowy land, but yet to feel the warm of the wind passing through, rivers and very high mountains in Janne are mysteriously easy to climb and to reach their top, one particular mountain - Evolist - which is 5 times higher than Mount Everest, that is the highest mountain on Earth - Mantis saw no business in holding bases on Janne as their ugly and devilish thinking of theirs didn't match the beauty of Janne, and therefore it is not visited by Mantis.

Conquest planet

Order of story planets:

Motra-> Solars ->Kana ->Jhanam
 

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Here is my idea of a system:

The Helios System

The Helios System holds one of humanity's largest Army's, This System is one of the only systems in the galaxy that isn't taken over completely by the mantis (only parts of the planets in the solar system are taken over by the Mantis). The fleet rests in the Helios system, they are growing bigger, and stronger everyday, when they get strong enough, they will destroy the Mantis, but until then, they rest, and train the fleet upon the few mantis that are scattered among some of the solar systems planets. Helios is a binary star, both of the stars are blue Hyper-giant stars.

Planets

Helios Prime
Helios Prime is the Main planet of the solar system, and also one of the major planets in human rebellion. It is where the rebellion army rests, trains, and grows. The average planet temperature is 28 Degrees Celsius. Rumours have been spreading that the rebellion are working on almost indestructible ships to destroy the mantis, hopefully we will find out the truth.

Crematorius
Crematorius is the closest planet to its star, being the most hottest planet. Surface temperature in day-time on Crematorius is 1000 degrees Celsius, while at night-time, surface temperature drops to minus 400 degrees Celsius. Crematorius Doesn't have a permanent colony living on the planet, due to the high temperatures, however, there is an underground base where some people stay temporarily, also, there are signs of mantis activity on the planet, perhaps looking for Cryonite.

UX-1
UX-1 is the furthest planet from its star, Surface temperatures on UX-1 are minus 1200 degrees Celsius, making it the coldest planet in its solar system. However on the planet there are a number mining basse where people mine cryonite due to the tremendous amount of cryonite the planet contains, but because of that, the planet has a high amount of mantis on it.

Asteroid mining field
The Asteroid mining field is an asteroid field where People mine cryonite. But that not all the mine for. The asteroids in that kind of asteroid field, the asteroids contain a very strong element, called "Utoplunatonium", it is an extremely rare element that only very few solar systems in the Galaxy contain such an element. it is rumoured that they use this element to create very tough ships, and very tough technology to go with the type of ship. If they are using it: at the moment the things they are creating with this strong element are all still Prototypes, they are testing them, improving them, strengthening them so they can be fully prepared to obliterate the mantis. However, the problem is, is that there are some mantis roaming the asteroid field, searching for cryonite, Fortunately they are unaware of the Utoplunatonium. Are these rumours true? We will never know unless we see it for ourselves.

Protonious
Protonius is an Earth-like planet, like Helios Prime. Like earth, it has a forcefield right round the planet so mantis cannot get in, only humans or their allies can go to Protonius. Protonius is the only planet in its solar system where there is no mantis at all. and the only planet That isn't involved in the Human-Mantis war.
Although the peace will not last forever....


Mantis Units

Mantis Accelerator
A Very fast mantis unit that is capable of giving speed actuator to itself and also to its fellow mantis, its weakness is that is has weak armour.

Mantis Spider
The mantis spider isnt a starship,it is a ground unit that doesn't fly. The mantis spider is quite a slow unit, but has very tough armour, it is also capable of stunning you.

Mantis Stealther
Like the mantis assassin, it is half invisible, but is faster, and has just about the same armour as the mantis detonator. Due to its strong armour and fast speed, it is not a mantis that you would want to fight.

Mantis Titan
There are only just about 1 or 2 on a planet, these mantis are huge mantis capital ships that have much more armour than the mantis harvester. They also have the ability to give any mantis 500 metres near it, a shield or an attack charge. Due to its immense size and armour, its weakness is that it can be escaped with ease due to its slowness.

Mantis Collider
These mantis units are like kamikaze fighters, when they spot you, they will simply crash into you, destroying themselves and inflicting damage to you. They have weak armour.
 
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defacto said:
Something you should certainly improve with your ideas are the story, they do feel a bit odd...
Well I am working on it but I do try to play the acually game so I might be able to be one of the 1st in one of these systems if they do make them. Oh and could you specify any thing in perticular to edit? Thats 7+ Pages on a work Doc there.

Btw I think I'm going to move my FvF/New Systems/Post-Mantis idea to a new thread, it doesnt really fit in here since Its not only new systems but also old one but completly revenorated.
 

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CommanderCody said:
defacto said:
Something you should certainly improve with your ideas are the story, they do feel a bit odd...
Well I am working on it but I do try to play the acually game so I might be able to be one of the 1st in one of these systems if they do make them. Oh and could you specify any thing in perticular to edit? Thats 7+ Pages on a work Doc there.

Btw I think I'm going to move my FvF/New Systems/Post-Mantis idea to a new thread, it doesnt really fit in here since Its not only new systems but also old one but completly revenorated.
Lol, good idea, take all names of the makers
 
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"take all names of the makers"

Eh whats that mean? If you are infering to the 1-3 other people who contributed I am including their names in the very begining.
 

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Mantis Accelerator
A Very fast mantis unit that is capable of giving speed actuator to itself and also to its fellow mantis, its weakness is that is has weak armour.

Mantis Spider
The mantis spider isnt a starship,it is a ground unit that doesn't fly. The mantis spider is quite a slow unit, but has very tough armour, it is also capable of stunning you.

Mantis Stealther
Like the mantis assassin, it is half invisible, but is faster, and has just about the same armour as the mantis detonator. Due to its strong armour and fast speed, it is not a mantis that you would want to fight.

Mantis Titan
There are only just about 1 or 2 on a planet, these mantis are huge mantis capital ships that have much more armour than the mantis harvester. They also have the ability to give any mantis 500 metres near it, a shield or an attack charge. Due to its immense size and armour, its weakness is that it can be escaped with ease due to its slowness.

Mantis Collider
These mantis units are like kamikaze fighters, when they spot you, they will simply crash into you, destroying themselves and inflicting damage to you. They have weak armour.[/b]
Maybe give the spider a sniper blaster and sniper stun and maybe a aim computer.

Give the mantis collider when it crashes a aggrobomb that is much more powerfull then a detonator.

Mantis Bomber
This Mantis will drop bombs (aggrobomb) close to you, to stop you from fleeing it will stun you (stun charge).

Myphion
A planet, turned many times in dark color, the only color it gets, is from the star from far away. This was a great hide-out for pirates, until mantis discovered it. Every time the pirate numbers goes up, a great mantis fleet in the lead of lord fam doom will help.
Conquest planet with mantis, that will kill and dominate.
 
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Fraction vs Fraction

Ok, this is my version of the fraction system.

You will be able to choose a system and in that system a planet to start, on every planet you will learn your role.

Those planets can be in command of a fraction, they will say wich, and will tell the information of one.

You will get missions (given by you by a mentor ( a real player)). When you have learned enough you can choose what to do, Politics, Education, Army and Economics.

A mentor will be a part of education. If you choose this, you will learn the new players of your group how to work.

You can choose Politics if you want to be emporor or a leader of a rebel party.

Democratics let's everyone choose for a party, this party makes the plans, like war, new ships etc.
In Aristocratics, only a small groups leads the fraction.
In the Autocratics, only 1 person has the lead, he decides what happens.

Army is a group of fighters, Everyone will have to fight in a war, but an army is a small group of fighters that will do special missions.

If you choose economics you could be the leader of a mine or a pilot of a harvester.

But the main part is war, every fraction will be attacked once, maybe by a differant star system or by a rebel group. They could loot cryonite from a harvester or try to attack a cryonite depot.

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Every fraction also needs buildings, These can be build for cryonite by a emporar/empress/king/queen/president etc.

The main building for every fraction is a hangar. Here the pirates that are shot down can respawn. Without this a fraction is helpless. Rebel groups can hide there base, and this is only seen by the group itself, the main fraction of the system has to find this one.

Another building thats needed is a factory, here the fraction can build new NPC's and Pilots can buy new ships. The blueprints are made by the lab.

Lab, here the fraction can upgrade there technology, they can choose about styles, Antares Industries, Gemini Components, Mizar Stellar Technology, Sol Technogoly Anti-Matter, (Draconis).

Cities/Villages, to support NPC's the fraction needs citizens, they live in cities and villages. Villages can be build on planets.

More buildings...

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Every Fraction also needs ships, NPC's can be build when there are enough citizens.

Probes can be used to detect rebel hangars, these are very expensive.

Players can also buy ships, there have to be blueprints from, there are new build ships when there are no from your kind you can also order a ship, this is more expensive.
 

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stimo said:
Fraction vs Fraction

Ok, this is my version of the fraction system.

You will be able to choose a system and in that system a planet to start, on every planet you will learn your role.

Those planets can be in command of a fraction, they will say wich, and will tell the information of one.

You will get missions (given by you by a mentor ( a real player)). When you have learned enough you can choose what to do, Politics, Education, Army and Economics.

A mentor will be a part of education. If you choose this, you will learn the new players of your group how to work.

You can choose Politics if you want to be emporor or a leader of a rebel party.

Democratics let's everyone choose for a party, this party makes the plans, like war, new ships etc.
In Aristocratics, only a small groups leads the fraction.
In the Autocratics, only 1 person has the lead, he decides what happens.

Army is a group of fighters, Everyone will have to fight in a war, but an army is a small group of fighters that will do special missions.

If you choose economics you could be the leader of a mine or a pilot of a harvester.

But the main part is war, every fraction will be attacked once, maybe by a differant star system or by a rebel group. They could loot cryonite from a harvester or try to attack a cryonite depot.

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Every fraction also needs buildings, These can be build for cryonite by a emporar/empress/king/queen/president etc.

The main building for every fraction is a hangar. Here the pirates that are shot down can respawn. Without this a fraction is helpless. Rebel groups can hide there base, and this is only seen by the group itself, the main fraction of the system has to find this one.

Another building thats needed is a factory, here the fraction can build new NPC's and Pilots can buy new ships. The blueprints are made by the lab.

Lab, here the fraction can upgrade there technology, they can choose about styles, Antares Industries, Gemini Components, Mizar Stellar Technology, Sol Technogoly Anti-Matter, (Draconis).

Cities/Villages, to support NPC's the fraction needs citizens, they live in cities and villages. Villages can be build on planets.

More buildings...

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Every Fraction also needs ships, NPC's can be build when there are enough citizens.

Probes can be used to detect rebel hangars, these are very expensive.

Players can also buy ships, there have to be blueprints from, there are new build ships when there are no from your kind you can also order a ship, this is more expensive.
do u mean "Faction"?



Mantis Spotter The Mantis Spotter is more of a Drone whather than a ship, These ships, dispite there looks, is very dangerous as they spot targets for Mantis Dive Bombers. However it's strengths are also it's weakness as the spotter has light armour and completly unarmed except for a laser pointer.

Mantis Dive Bomber The Mantis Dive Bomber is capabul of dropping 6 Fusion Bombs on a single target at once. Dispite the fact it can't be targeted due to it's service sealing, they can still be disabled and made vonuble by hitting Control Nodes around a planets surface.
 
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mantis imma****youup

fires chuck norris at you who then roundhouse kicks you into the sun from where you will never return. remember developers- chuck norris knows where you live and so will travel to your house and roundhouse kick you into the sun for making a rubbish 3D version of him. he may then roundhouse all the PG players into the sun for looking at him in game as this does not represent his godliness properly.

mantis runawayandhidetoannoyeveryone

as soon as it appears on your radar, it orbits to another planet where you must travel to find it. However, when you get there, it orbits again and so is unkillable. it drops every rare in the game at once without fail, but you cant kill it so there isnt really much point in it.

what? they're better than your ideas :sneaky: :LOL:
 
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